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great melodies

drums feel like they are timeshifted though, could use some work.

YouriX responds:

Hmmm i guess i should up the drum beat. Thanks for the advice. :)

Awesome

love this kind of crazy hectic beat unlike the standard stuff. Much more interesting+action packed

Or4nges responds:

Action packed haha. I love it.

Thanks!

it actually sounds better than most songs on here

which is kinda sad, but i love how obnoxious it is and how crappy the voice edits are lol

Or4nges responds:

Obnoxious voice edits are the best voice edits.

cool but imo the pianio melody

doesnt fit really

Mich responds:

Indeed!

kappy, this doesnt suck one bit

sounds like some of the signed stuff if you ask me.
more distortion+eq on bass i say, when something sounds crap when its getting distorted its becuz the wrong frequencies are getting distorted

Kalapsia responds:

lols i dont think it sounds like signed stuff, i've been comparing it to alot of phace and misanthrop and it doesn't even compare, their bass stabs and lows on their reeces are so insane

flavorful, minty and fresh

nice drums and everything fits nicely, 8/10 becuz not enough pads imo but its awesome

Kalapsia responds:

OH MY GOODDDDDDDDDDDDDD THANK U BICC BOIII i would review your tracks but fucking chrome is always glitched where i cant hear anything or play anything on newgrounds.. fucking flash anf fucckin chrome man

i think it needs more melody stuff

bring up the melodic stuff id say, i kno its ur style but im not much for the bitcrushed snare+kick.
a pad serenade in the background would fill it out id say

AeraDynamic responds:

it has no bass yet but the main synths are already there, just need to arrange it properly and write a liquid -ish bass to it, add some stabs that give it bit of a evil touch ( i like the contrast) will do it later sometime

bass is prty cool, needs to be more organized tho

when it comes to bass mods less is more, find parts in the beat where the reese sounds really sick, keep those, and then replace the rest with something more melodic like a non modulated distorted reese where you can tell the melody.
sweet beats though, also the 200 hz is distorted slightly on the snare, but its not that noticeable. good work tho. Also it could use some crazy neurofunk edits with random other breaks thrown in. For instance after the first kick in your beat, cut the rest of the beat including the snare until the kick, and play some really crazy fat reese inbetween to fill the space, it sounds intense if done right lol

kulajs responds:

Yea man i agree with you,and sure i must add some crazy breaks in this it lacks some energy.Thanks for feedback i appreciate that:)

keep makin music dude

i hear slivers of potential in there.... add more ambient sounds to fill the silence id say

a few tips

melodies are nice but could be improved m a bunch
some of tehg instruments are too loud, drums are bein drowned out...
take the bass frequencies out of instruments that dont need it
make sure notes arent layering and creating dissonance..

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